Saturday, June 11, 2016

Disillusioned [A Sort-Of Poem]

Disillusioned within
Hope holding on by a string
Will I ever win?

A star in my eye
Shining brightly even when I cry
I don't want to live a lie

Pretending that I'm fine
Though I want to whine
My eyes will still shine

Well that was a pretty lame attempt at poetry, but it was fun. I've never written poetry before except in school when they made us, and I hated it at the time. I'd like to do it some more, it's really interesting and fascinating to read and to hear. I love that you can convey so much in so few words, and that there could be years worth of story in just one line. ♥


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